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  1. I agree with you. I don’t think the box is trying to say “these are delicious recipes for entertaining” as Jennings thinks. I don’t think anyone would ever say “entertaining recipes” to mean “recipes to serve when you are entertaining.”

  2. That’s interesting. I’ve only been reading his blog (off and on) for a couple of months; I didn’t realize he had a message board, or that he responded on it.

    My point wasn’t can the phrasing be interpreted to mean what Jennings thinks it means? Because, if it does, then yes, obviously a comma is grammatically correct. My point was more that in this instance, I don’t think that’s what they meant.

    I don’t think these are “recipes to serve when you are entertaining.” I think these are “recipes that will entertain you.”

    I haven’t even seen these crackers. (And I’ve only read a little bit of Eats, Shoots and Leaves.) I think I’ve spent too much time thinking about this.

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